I still like it- but I guess the Style you use is more "you" or fits you much better-and I personally think the lines arera bit...boring- I actually think it could work if you variate a bit the thickness inbetween the lines to keep it more dynamic.
I really the details and and the decent shading, the folding the dots and the backround work. Especially here the Backround just look, like you were kinda annoyed to do it anyway, just doing your that because you got to do. Unfortunately a lot of Comics from the house of Ideas look like that. Your better than that.
So Please stick with your actually style !!!!
(and remember: This critics are done by a woman who cant even Ink in this style- Its just my first impression^^)

this kind of style works better for young readers´ books, I believe this should have work great on the title, plus the simple lineart leaves more room to the colorist to work shades and lights

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el estilo esta tremendo! muy wapo me ha gistado mucho, ahora dibujas mas realista no? tambien me gusta, aunque los estilos asi me gustan mas. Muy wapas las comosiciones de la cuarta y la última viñeta. Espero que el color aplicado fuese bastante plano porque le pega cantidad. Bueno, nos vemos

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¿ero como conseguis que os den estos trabajos?

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simple, but it sure works! love it, man! nice job!

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Thanks, man!!